An oven that is stopp'd, or river stay'd, Free vent of words love's fire doth assuage9; He sees her coming, and begins to glow, O, what a sight it was, wistly to view 66 66 the grief that does not speak, Whispers the o'er-fraught heart, and bids it break." 9 Free vent of words love's FIRE doth assuage.] Fire is here, as in many other places, used by our poet as a dissyllable. MALONE. I But when the heart's ATTORNEY once is mute, 66 Why should calamity be full of words? Windy attorneys to their client woes." STEEVens. The heart's attorney is the tongue, which undertakes and pleads for it. MALONE. 2 Looks on the DULL EARTH, &c.] So, in The Two Gentlemen of Verona: Upon the dull earth dwelling." the fighting conflict of her hue! STEEVENS. How white and red, &c.] So, in the Taming of the Shrew : 66 Such war of white and red within her cheeks." Again, in Hamlet: 66 Sir, in my heart there was a kind of fighting." W. But now, her cheek was pale, and by and by Now was she just before him as he sat, His tend'rer cheek receives her soft hand's print, As apt as new-fall'n snow takes any dint. O, what a war of looks was then between them! Full gently now she takes him by the hand, Or ivory in an alabaster band; So white a friend engirts so white a foe: This beauteous combat, wilful and unwilling, Once more the engine of her thoughts began: My heart all whole as thine, thy heart my wound'; 11 had His acts] His for its. So, in Hamlet: 5 And all this DUMB PLAY had his ACTS made plain With tears, which, CHORUS-LIKE, her eyes did rain.] From the present passage, I think it probable, that this first production of our author's muse was not composed till after he had left Stratford, and became acquainted with the theatre. MALONE. 6 thy heart my wound ;] i. e. thy heart wounded as mine is. MALONE. For one sweet look thy help I would assure thee, Though nothing but my body's bane would cure thee. Give me my hand, saith he, why dost thou feel it? For shame, he cries, let go, and let me go; Thus she replies: Thy palfrey, as he should, Else, suffer'd, it will set the heart on fire: The sea hath bounds, but deep desire hath none'; Therefore no marvel though thy horse be gone. How like a jade he stood, tied to the tree', thou dost stone my heart." soft sighs can never GRAVE IT;] an impression on it. STEEVENS. So, in Othello: 9 The sea hath bounds, but deep desire hath none;] So, in Macbeth: 1 but there's no bottom, none, "To my voluptuousness." W. tied to THE tree,] Thus the quarto 1593, and the 16mo. 1596; for which the edition of 1600 and all subsequent have substituted-a tree. MALONE. But when he saw his love, his youth's fair fee, Throwing the base thong from his bending crest, Who sees his true love in her naked bed, Who is so faint, that dare not be so bold, Let me excuse thy courser, gentle boy; 6 Who SEES his true love in her NAKED bed, Teaching the SHEETS A WHITER HUE THAN WHITE,] So, in Cymbeline: Cytherea, "How bravely thou becom'st thy bed! fresh lily! "And whiter than the sheets." Who sees, &c. is the reading of the quarto 1593. In the 16mo. of 1596, for sees, we have-seeks. The true reading was restored in the edition of 1600; but it is manifest, from various other instances, that the correction was made by guess, and not from a comparison of copies. The following passage in a poem by George Peele, preserved in an old miscellany, entitled the Phoenix Nest, 4to. 1593, in which a similar sentiment is found, (and which, perhaps, Shakspeare had in his thoughts,) fully supports the reading of the original copy: "Who hath beheld faire Venus in her pride "Of nakednes all alablaster white, "In ivorie bed strait laid by Mars his side "To wish, to dallie and to offer game "To coy, to court, et cætera to doe; (Forgive me chastnes if in termes of shame "To thy renowne, I paint what longs thereto.)" MALONE. 7 His other AGENTS aim at like delight?] So also Macbeth expresseth himself to his wife : up I am settled, and bend VOL. XX. D To take advantage on presented joy; Though I were dumb, yet his proceedings teach thee: O learn to love; the lesson is but plain, I know not love, (quoth he,) nor will not know it, Unless it be a boar, and then I chase it; 'Tis much to borrow, and I will not owe it; My love to love is love but to disgrace it"; For I have heard it is a life in death, That laughs, and weeps, and all but with a breath". Who wears a garment shapeless and unfinish'd? 8 My love to love is love but to disgrace it ;] My inclination towards love is only a desire to render it contemptible.-The sense is almost lost in the jingle of words. MALONE. 9 For I have heard it is a LIFE IN DEATH, THAT LAUGHS, AND WEEPS, &c.] So, in King Richard III. : "For now they kill me with a living death. Again, in Troilus and Cressida : "These lovers cry,-Oh! oh! they die! "Yet that which seems the wound to kill, "Doth turn oh! oh! to ha! ha! he! 66 So dying love lives still: "Oh! oh! a while; but ha! ha! ha! "Oh! oh! groans out for ha! ha! ha!" MALONE. 1 Who plucks the BUD before one leaf put forth ?] So, in The Shepheard's Song of Venus and Adonis, by H. C. 1600: "I am now too young MALONE. |